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charlie was a poor young kid who lived with his parents and all his grandparents . every year his parents buy him a wonka bar . Around the time of his birthday willy wonka annouced a contest for 5 lucky people . He hid 5 golden tickets in wonka bars and everyone was trying to get there hands on them . Charlies birthday came and his parents got him a wonka bar and he didnt win /: then his grandpa wanted him to win so badly he gave him his cigarette money to buy another wonka bar . That one didnt win eathier , by that time there was only one ticket left . charlie was on his way home and found money in the street , picked it up and went to the nearest store to buy a wonka bar ... it was the last golden ticket ! charlie found he ran home and his family didnt belive him . He was supposed to go to the factory and meet wonka himself . him and his grandfather went the next day with all the other winners and got to go into the wonka factory ..